Numbness

If  we have our heads
Sleeping on our arms
A tingling numbness
Spreads through our hand

Its uncomfortable 
We shake our hand
Till the feelings gone
Then we return to sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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G. Wolf Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 1:49 AM
Darlene, I enjoyed reading, thank you. /Max/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 10:17 AM
Hello Maximillian, Hi! So nice to see you. Is it hot where you live? Thank you for the lovely comment, my friend. Darlene/
Wolf Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 7:48 PM
That's right... although it takes me quite a while to recover at my -- ahem -- early middle age. (Early middle 70's, that is. lol). ~ Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Hello Gershon, LoL You made me laugh, thank you.Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Romios Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 2:18 PM
Great description of that yucky feeling we all get from time to time.. good write Hug Sparkles for me! Pangiie xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 3:05 PM
Hello Panag iota, I will hug sparkles for you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. xxx/Darlene/
Sands Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 7:20 AM
Yes, that happens and the numbness lasts a while, then passes. You describe it well. Have a nice day :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 12:22 PM
Hello Heidi, Yes numbness does last a while then goes away. Thank you. A bright sunny day here3 and a bit cooler. Hugs. /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 12:45 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Numbness" write. You said so much in a few words. I wish you would write more...  Have a fun day writing away.................
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:49 PM
Hello Paula, Thank you for thi wonderful comment. i will try to write more. Hugs. /Darlene/
Beaufort Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 10:30 AM
Darlene, so true it is. We can also see by the comments that many of us (including yours truly) experience numbness as a result of being in a certain position. It seems to happen a lot. It's likely a message not to be too sedentary.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:47 PM
Hello Duke Beaufort, So nice to see you. I hope you had a nice day. Yes it happens to all of us. that is true. Yes maybe a message would help. Enjohy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Nicholsen Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 9:21 PM
This is so very true lovely write Darlene many blessings.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Hello Yolanda, It is nice to see you. this happens to me often. Thank you. Many blessings. /Darlene/
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Good obserbation. Totally true Darlene. That happens often. So nice to capture that moment. Have a good evening my friendxxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 3:33 PM
Hello Maria, yes that happens often. thank you for the lovely comment,. Good evening . I will . You enjoy your evening m y friend. xx/ Darlene/
Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Dear Darlene, You beautifully capture a simple yet relatable moment of discomfort and relief. The sensation of numbness, often felt when our heads rest on our arms, is something many of us experience but rarely pause to reflect upon. I love how your words bring attention to the fleeting nature of discomfort and comfort in returning to sleep. It's to appreciate the small moments of relief amidst life's discomforts. - Blessings, Daniel
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 3:40 PM
Hello Daniel Rodgers, Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. The tingling in the arm or the leg is uncomfortable. it feels what seems to be for hours. yet it is only for awhile. thank you for the comment Daniel. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Narain Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:33 AM
Great aadvice. It happens so often.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:26 AM
Hello Jay, Thank you jay. yes it happens often. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Alhemaidy Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 12:18 AM
Hello lovely Darlene :-) I think it happens of the best of families. Best wishes ~ AA
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Hello Abdullia, Yes i also think it happens to the best 0f families. Thank you. Best wishes. /Darlene/
Greenhough Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:54 PM
A delicate poem on a pestering occurrence.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:29 AM
hello Hilda, yes that is what it is. Hugs. /Darlene/
Cunningham Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Something we all encounter Darlene, feels like your arm has died, thankfully it's only temporary where you've stopped the blood flowing. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:15 PM
hello Tom, yes that is right. it tangles what seems for hours. It is a horrible feeling. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 12:36 PM
- Yes, it is an unpleasant feeling ... sleep well, Darlene :) - Great written :) - hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:16 PM
hello Sunshine Smile, yes it is. good thing it does not happen often. Hugs. /Darlene/
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