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1Is the person my mom gave life to.
9Months waiting to see the light.
9Hours of pain.
4First kisses my mom gave me.
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April 22, 2009 at 9:27 AM
Juan, Excellent job and a great focus on love from mom. Relationships are the key to everything, and the first relationship most of us have is with our mom. Congratulations!
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April 21, 2009 at 10:50 AM
wow crazy but good
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April 17, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Creative acrostic Juan, let your imagination run wild...Raul
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