Numb

Numb to emotion…numb to life itself. It’s my surroundings making me this way, nothing else. Pain…nothing but a mere state of mind. Peace and happiness we all strive to find in a world full of darkness, terror, and blood. We all fall backwards and end up with a “thud’. Walking blindly through a wall of fire, surely that’s nobody’s desire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Clemons Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 8:22 PM
Deep poem, very dark but true, very well written in few words. Enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace.
Horsman Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 10:46 AM
This is so emotional jasmine, but you have a wonderful talent, like the depth here. harry
Situation Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:47 PM
happiness is something you can find. by supressing your desires.
Falotico Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 6:35 AM
I am spending today checking out poets I have never read before.. And you are my first... Excellent piece and I plan on reding you more.... always with a smile Michael
Brown Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 7:15 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jasmine. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
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