Numb

Numb to emotion…numb to life itself. It’s my surroundings making me this way, nothing else. Pain…nothing but a mere state of mind. Peace and happiness we all strive to find in a world full of darkness, terror, and blood. We all fall backwards and end up with a “thud’. Walking blindly through a wall of fire, surely that’s nobody’s desire

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 9/18/2013 8:22:00 PM

Deep poem, very dark but true, very well written in few words. Enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2012 10:46:00 AM

This is so emotional jasmine, but you have a wonderful talent, like the depth here. harry

The Situation

Date: 1/11/2012 5:47:00 PM

happiness is something you can find. by supressing your desires.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/11/2012 6:35:00 AM

I am spending today checking out poets I have never read before.. And you are my first... Excellent piece and I plan on reding you more.... always with a smile Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/10/2012 7:15:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jasmine. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol