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Numb

whats gone wrong?
am I past the point of no return?
will I get my feet back on the ground?

sitting down 
all alone inside my head
getting lost within my thoughts 
feeling like there's no escape 
getting sick and falling down 

falling down 
increase in speed
there's no where left to turn around

I guess I'm numb
disappointment has led me here
I need some help to leave this place
some help I haven't quite yet found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/7/2009 7:55:00 PM
Wonderful, I have been there before... I hope you find the help you are looking for... Great write welcome to poetrysoup!
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Date: 7/4/2009 1:53:00 PM
Awesome job and I can appreciate your position! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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Date: 6/29/2009 11:07:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Cameron. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2009 9:48:00 AM
Love how you involved your Knowledge of physics to the term "numb" ^^
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Date: 6/28/2009 3:29:00 PM
I get numb too
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