Nr Skip and Jack

Skip and Jack would cut no slack.
When someone crossed theyr'e wires.
They didn't hold back their tough attack.
They'd proceed to slash your tires.

One day when they both fell asleep.
Somebody stole their dreams.
Now when they pray for souls to keep.
They see God in their beams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/8/2013 6:17:00 PM
hello, my friend!! Thanks for commenting today.
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Date: 4/5/2013 5:50:00 PM
I'm so glad I found this one, someone stole their dreams indeed, awesome ;}
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Date: 4/2/2013 4:47:00 PM
Another great one...just sings...
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Date: 4/1/2013 3:13:00 PM
Interesting take on the NR contest..Congrats ..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2013 11:00:00 AM
Congrats on your worthy win!
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:15:00 PM
Hi Robert, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:43:00 PM
Robert, congrats on the winners list. Write some more nursery rhymes!
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Date: 3/29/2013 1:02:00 PM
Hi and congratulations on your win Robert xx
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Date: 3/29/2013 12:15:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win !!!
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Date: 3/27/2013 12:08:00 AM
just coming back to this one. I really do like it!! so you golf, huh? If I am ever single again, I might come check you out. heehee (actually I can't stand that sport!)
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:57:00 PM
Back home, so was checking to see if you posted something new...AND YOU DID !! Skip and Jack sound like shadey characters lol Enjoyed !!
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Date: 3/24/2013 4:22:00 PM
Very clever, and a good vengeance poem!!! Wish you would do a whole bunch more of these. Well, you are my last comment for the day. I have to go get dinner out of the oven. It's my son in law's Bday and he will be here soon!
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