Nr Skip and Jack

Skip and Jack would cut no slack.
When someone crossed theyr'e wires.
They didn't hold back their tough attack.
They'd proceed to slash your tires.

One day when they both fell asleep.
Somebody stole their dreams.
Now when they pray for souls to keep.
They see God in their beams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 6:17 PM
hello, my friend!! Thanks for commenting today.
Duncan Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 5:50 PM
I'm so glad I found this one, someone stole their dreams indeed, awesome ;}
Jones Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Another great one...just sings...
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 3:13 PM
Interesting take on the NR contest..Congrats ..Sara
Eastman Avatar
March 30, 2013 at 11:00 AM
Congrats on your worthy win!
A   Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Hi Robert, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 4:43 PM
Robert, congrats on the winners list. Write some more nursery rhymes!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 1:02 PM
Hi and congratulations on your win Robert xx
Squyres Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:15 PM
Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win !!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 12:08 AM
just coming back to this one. I really do like it!! so you golf, huh? If I am ever single again, I might come check you out. heehee (actually I can't stand that sport!)
Squyres Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Back home, so was checking to see if you posted something new...AND YOU DID !! Skip and Jack sound like shadey characters lol Enjoyed !!
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 4:22 PM
Very clever, and a good vengeance poem!!! Wish you would do a whole bunch more of these. Well, you are my last comment for the day. I have to go get dinner out of the oven. It's my son in law's Bday and he will be here soon!
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