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Now She Sleeps

Now she sleeps, Her head on a white silk pillow Her soft brunette curls Framing her pretty face Now relaxed and at peace A soft glow still on her cheek Contentment around her eyes A subtle smile about her lips

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Paul Curtis

Date: 6/10/2011 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Carol and I wish the same for you Paul

Paul Curtis

Date: 6/10/2011 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Leo - I left it so the reader can chose if she awakens or not. Regards Paul

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 6/10/2011 8:40:00 AM

A very nice write...it would have been quite interesting had you included a concluding line indicating something like: "Now she sleeps, and will never waken..." (Mordant, I know.) Good work!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2011 7:10:00 AM

Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Paul. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol