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Now She Is Gone

I once loved a girl with all my heart and soul, but now she is gone. i close my eyes and all i see and breath is her. how can i let someone so great like her go. she was my one true love in my life. i cant get you out of my mind and heart. please come back. when i walk i see you, when i talk i see you, when i sleep i see you everything i do in my life is all about you. im not perfect well nither are you. how can i show you my love how can i show you that im not the man i was. i never cheated and i dont lie all i do is think of you and love you. but you also made me angery and feel really hurt by doing the same thing i did to you, its not right. but i still love you with all of my heart. please come back to my my summer brezz. i know this poem isnt really that good but its how i feel

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Date: 7/3/2016 1:31:00 AM
GREG H, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/9/2009 2:47:00 PM
i sent you soup mail for futhur discussion if you like. your friend Alley
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Date: 3/9/2009 9:12:00 AM
dear Greg, looks like you have the same problem as i. it isn't the greatest feeling to love someone so much and then they walk out of your life. but like you said to me, don't give up and show her how much you love her. your friend Alley Poe
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:45:00 AM
Sometimes it takes distance to really realize how much we love someone....this is great, always, Christy
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