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Now Or Never

i have found an answer but the question i forgot i want to yell it aloud but that i cannot conspiracy fills the air whom we gave the power to bring a brighter future brings doomsday without tears now its time, to break the barriers to wipe away all those fears war, gun-smoke fills land and air destroying everything that we love oh! dear we brought this upon us the aftermath will ruin us no one can save us may be next species will preserve us peace is at stake, that's the answer but it's too late, oh! lord we all can only say

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Date: 9/12/2010 8:28:00 PM
thank you all for your warm welcome ....well i am trying to write ...not exactly my field
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:10:00 PM
A most wonderful warm welcome to you Karma. I enjoyed your poignant poem very much. Blessings, Connie (Please click on Soup mail)
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Date: 8/26/2010 4:04:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Karma. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2010 7:14:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write on war and peace, Sunil. Nice expression-- war, gun-smokes fills land and air destroyiong everything we love.
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Date: 8/25/2010 4:39:00 PM
What is the meaning of your name sunil?
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Date: 8/25/2010 4:36:00 PM
ohh, what an emotional piece, God will save you! thi is like a cry for your country I guess?... To avoid "I Don't know" try to read up the forms of poetry... this poem is more like a free verse. I would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/25/2010 11:58:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup .. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. check out all the contests offered on P.S. contest page.. good luck..with luv..
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