Now I Feel So Cool Sweetie

Now I feel so cool sweetie cool like lonely winter
I am dying but you are like hot and sweet summer!

Now you don’t need me anymore 
Now you don’t want me anymore
But I love you as before!

Now I know it’s not a very big sin
Sweetie to love you is not too mean!

But you don’t love me anymore 
And you don’t miss me anymore
But I love you as before!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 9:01 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Asif. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Veryappealing plea on the betrayal in love, Asif
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