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I feel the world crashing around me, my breath fading. Pain surges through my body. I fear my hope of life is diminishing. All is lost I can feel the regret of every lost sole. I long for relief but all I feel is torture. When will it all end, when will the last hour be, how will I suffer death?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/27/2014 7:42:00 AM
No one wants to have this feelings, you convey so strong. Hope your tortured soul does not suffer long and a smile will soon follow.
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Date: 5/8/2014 7:47:00 PM
....as painless as possible. Very sad poem and nicely written :) Ana
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Date: 5/8/2014 5:54:00 PM
Hi Olivia, Very powerful write, Congrats on this write being featured. Thank you so much for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/8/2014 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/8/2014 11:27:00 AM
Good lines.
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Date: 5/8/2014 10:14:00 AM
hi Olivia, . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Olivia
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Date: 5/5/2014 1:51:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Olivia :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:42:00 PM
Olivia,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2014 9:37:00 AM
Good morning, Olivia, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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