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November's Sun

November's sun brings smiles to every passerby's face As throngs weave their way through downtown's rat race On overcast days eyes are cast down or look straight ahead Today they glance upward like petals of a flower to soak in the goodness of each precious hour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/25/2019 9:11:00 AM
Beautifully done my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2019 9:29:00 AM
Your kind words validate whatever time spent on this! Thanks, Chris. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/25/2019 12:42:00 AM
I was sitting outside like a cat in the November sun yesterday, and you have described my feelings perfectly!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2019 9:28:00 AM
I heard you me-owing all the way over here on the North side of Chicago! ~ Felix
Date: 11/24/2019 2:22:00 PM
November's sun does indeed bring a smile. Great work Gershon, a simple yet uplifting concept. Hope you are well my friend...Ron
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, for you kind words, Ron! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/24/2019 2:06:00 PM
i could so see this....we had rain mixed with snow briefly most the day, sun's trying to break out now...i know i was looking down at the puddles instead of up at the sky... enjoyed this one :) hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 3:17:00 PM
Something wonderful about the sun's light and rays picks our heads up! Thanks for the insightful comment, my friend! :) gw

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