Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

November's Sun

November's sun brings smiles
   to every passerby's face
As throngs weave their way
   through downtown's rat race

On overcast days
   eyes are cast down 
or look straight ahead

Today they glance upward
   like petals of a flower
to soak in the goodness 
   of each precious hour

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Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:11 AM Beautifully done my friend. Gershon Wolf November 25, 2019 at 9:29 AM Your kind words validate whatever time spent on this! Thanks, Chris. Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger November 25, 2019 at 12:42 AM I was sitting outside like a cat in the November sun yesterday, and you have described my feelings perfectly! Gershon Wolf November 25, 2019 at 9:28 AM I heard you me-owing all the way over here on the North side of Chicago! ~ Felix

Ronald D Thompson November 24, 2019 at 2:22 PM November's sun does indeed bring a smile. Great work Gershon, a simple yet uplifting concept. Hope you are well my friend...Ron Gershon Wolf November 24, 2019 at 3:17 PM Thank you so much for the encouragement, for you kind words, Ron! Cheers, Gershon

Sandra Adams November 24, 2019 at 2:06 PM i could so see this....we had rain mixed with snow briefly most the day, sun's trying to break out now...i know i was looking down at the puddles instead of up at the sky... enjoyed this one :) hugs Gershon Wolf November 24, 2019 at 3:17 PM Something wonderful about the sun's light and rays picks our heads up! Thanks for the insightful comment, my friend! :) gw