Novembers Coming

spongy mushroom land
a violets gentle smile
leaves on forest floor

squirrels cast aways
crucified pieces and bits 
acorns and walnuts

waters turn over
fish burrow into the banks
novembers coming
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Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 8:23 PM
A lovely autumn scene you have created, in a forest of enchantment. :)
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 7:22 PM
Lucky you! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:41 AM
I love enchanting forests; I live in my second one.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 6:56 PM
Mushroom land...I get some crazy mushrooms in our mossy yard when it rains...hope they don’t eat M-E! ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:41 AM
The ones in Kansas and Missouri are red mushrooms.
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 4:54 PM
Great(!) snapshots of the prelude to winter. Your words are worth 1,000 pictures! Nicely penned. ~ Autumnal Bliss, gw
Krutsinger Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:41 AM
Thank you so much Gershon
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