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Dodoistu
A poem that is among the longest of the Japanese poetry forms. Dodoistu is made up of four lines, with the first three lines consisting of seven syllables. The fourth and final line has five syllables only.

November's Chill

October's clouds mask the sun fueling November's chill, and Jack Frost's frozen art gets etched on window panes. (Dodoistu) 11-12-2020
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Mcintosh Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 4:46 PM
This is a lovely poem with depth in so few words. I love it. God bless you always friend
Pinet Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:05 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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