November In Delhi - India

November is best month of year
Winter begins, new year is near
It is time to enjoy the sun
Go for walks in afternoon sun
Most people seen sitting in sun
Eating nuts  and chatting is fun

It becomes dark outside too soon
Time to finish work before moon
At night really cool winds blow
Temperature is very low
Nights spent at home with heater on
Water cold geyser always on

Bed time in blanket thick and warm
Cold weather surrounds in full form
In morning  hot drink is a must
For bathing hot water is must
In cold water body is numb
Unable to move, you feel dumb

Date: 10/27/2020
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Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Years ago when I was a child sometimes the water would be frozen in the bucket in the kitchen so I am relate to the cold water. Sara
Balasubramanian Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 2:57 AM
Thanks and same to you too. Have a great day ahead friend. Take care Rama
Fenn Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 12:06 AM
Good job Rama!
Balasubramanian Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 3:14 AM
Thanks learning new forms from every contest. Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day ahead friend. Take care, Rama
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:22 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Rama (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Balasubramanian Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 3:11 AM
To err is human otherwise we will be God. Thanks for the contest and placement, learnt a new poetic form. Aloha( checked the meaning of this word. Great meaning) Have a blessed day ahead. Regards Rama.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 2:15 PM
I have spent winter in November and December in Delhi! Freezing!!!! And the fog! smog! A nice poem to give us a glimpse of ND!
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Thanks. In mumbai after marriage. Suddenly Delhi winter yaad aa gaya and phir participate kiya. Everyone only writes about autumn. Ya fog so much that nothing is visible. Clouds come down to earth.
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Ha, ha! Don't want a numb body, that's for sure. Enjoyed this glimpse into November in New Delhi. Thanks, Rama. Warm wishes, Gershon
Balasubramanian Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Thanks for dropping by to comment. Take care Rama
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