Nette Onclaud Poet Sijo

November Dreams

A marquee of stars dims, to beckon early winter’s stage;
Reflecting crunched flowers in ghastly hues, detached from their limp boughs.
The nightfall drapes hush of serenity , as flakes soothe trees’ nest.



 Andrea Dietrich's  October Bliss or November Dreams
10/09/2014

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Eve Roper January 29, 2015 at 3:36 PM Nette, love the imagery on this write, a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve

Andrea Dietrich December 16, 2014 at 9:43 PM nette, I came back here to ask you on your current contest, how is it different than etheree. You said it uses more syllables but I don't see anywhere that says how many to use. Did I misunderstand something? Please let me know right away. Thanks, andrea (soupmail me or just leave comment under a poem of mine)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 24, 2014 at 1:47 AM What words?! marquee of stars..crunched flowers... nightfall drapes hush of serenity ....flakes soothe trees’ nest. 'amber winter approaching. One of my favourite poems. Nature is so grand nette.

Heather Ober October 14, 2014 at 11:40 AM Wonderful, Nette! I don't know how you pack so much imagery into those three lines. Congrats on your win! And thanks for your sweet comment :)

Monterey Sirak October 12, 2014 at 9:10 AM Love the contrasts between 'crunched ghastly flowers' and 'nightfall draping while flakes soothe.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 12, 2014 at 8:59 AM Wow Nette another beauty ,, love the flakes soothe trees' nest,, congrats on great win!

Maurice Yvonne October 12, 2014 at 7:02 AM Congratulations(nette a wonderful read) on your win.

Paul Callus October 12, 2014 at 6:40 AM Beautiful sigo...the final line excellent, Nette. Congrats on another worthy win. // paul

Jan Allison October 12, 2014 at 5:33 AM dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani October 12, 2014 at 4:32 AM a serene surrounding to dream, Nette. congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 12, 2014 at 1:58 AM Lovely November dreams, nette, congrats

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2014 at 12:33 AM Beautifully done, Nette. Thanks for supporting my contests always with great poems. congratulations.

Justin Bordner October 11, 2014 at 6:11 PM The physicality in this poem has a light, texture and moisture that pronounces perfect rest Nette. Novembrr nights are sharp on the senses and beautiful...J.A.B.

Leon Datu October 11, 2014 at 1:39 AM True that, early winter brings out the contemplative spirit in us. Your poetry is magnificent and uplifting, Nette!

John Freeman October 10, 2014 at 4:44 PM Cool, Net.. your comment, Love the only power to re-manifested the natural form...such as the flower in your gem of a poem. One day if we receive Love as our savior we will have bodies of pure Love's Adamantine that never shall fade away. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta October 10, 2014 at 12:02 PM Lovely and perfect image of November, nette. good luck

Harry Horsman October 10, 2014 at 11:31 AM you take the reader right there nette, to nestle in the hush of serenity John Freeman October 10, 2014 at 4:46 PM Hey, Harry. Agape, Moses

Frederic Parker October 10, 2014 at 10:25 AM November dreams, done really well, beautiful Sijo my poetic friend, good luck in Andrea's contest

Jan Allison October 10, 2014 at 2:22 AM WoW! Andrea will adore this! good luck in the contest, hugs jan xxx

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen October 10, 2014 at 12:01 AM As flakes calm trees' nest,nice line.

Gary Bateman October 9, 2014 at 10:33 PM Nette, A most beautiful Sijo write here. I think you've captured "November Dreams" quite well here. A "7" from me my dear for a job well-done. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary