Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- November As We Remember -

November,

                                       sucked up by darkness

                               The change of nature takes place

                                         Against the silence,

                                       over the brown carpet

                                      The silence of existence

                                       in timeless winter coat

                                       made of thick brocade

                                       Cold, white as marble

                                       to knees, in the snow

                                           The lamp posts ...

                                       the flame of hope glows






29/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Geoffrey Brewer November 6, 2019 at 4:21 AM Beautifully atmospheric and evocative, Anne Lise Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2019 at 4:22 AM - Many thanks Geoffrey, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos November 4, 2019 at 12:15 PM This is such a magnificently creative poem Sunshine Smile I can feel the snow made of thick brocade and I can almost see myself standing knee deep with the lamp posts - love it. Hugs and blessings my friend, back after a two week absence. Hugs and blessings, Jenny Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2019 at 12:18 PM - Fortunately, we haven't got snow yet my friend :) - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire November 1, 2019 at 2:27 PM Oh, I bet you get to see the beautiful snowfall every winter, Sunshine. It looks "dreamy" in the photo and your words are beautifully chosen to create exquisite imagery. One of your best and a fave for me, Hon. Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 3:46 PM - There is less snow over the years, Carolyn ... but, a little snow every winter ... it melts away quickly ... I really appreciate your friendly visit and your fave of this poem :) - hugs // Anne- Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux October 30, 2019 at 9:08 AM You expressed this so well. I felt my body shiver. Hugs Rick. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 3:01 PM - Many thanks Richard, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior October 30, 2019 at 8:26 AM Lovely said Anne-Lise...but your smile brings us warmth lol...poetry hugs...^WW^ :o) Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 8:44 AM - Many thanks W.W., for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit October 30, 2019 at 6:41 AM That scenery feels so serene and pleasant..no wonder hope glows there--lovely poem, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 7:45 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish October 29, 2019 at 8:09 PM Nice ending! Soon the winter will arrive here in NYC. Change of seasons makes life more stimulating. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 4:03 AM - Many thanks Matthew, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands October 29, 2019 at 7:23 PM Oh, very nice! I like the flame of hope grows. Thanks for sharing. Nice to read tonight :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 4:02 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ts Poetry October 29, 2019 at 7:08 PM I want the first snow, to brighten things up, but then again I want the nice weather to hold on. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 4:02 AM - TS, many thanks for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer October 29, 2019 at 6:38 PM a lovely poem, anne-lise! you've captured the mood so well and the picture is a perfect accompaniment... Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 4:01 AM - Many thanks Ilene, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball October 29, 2019 at 5:28 PM Oh nicely done. Love the pic. It really added to the poem. Loved it. God Bless, JB Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 4:01 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell October 29, 2019 at 4:43 PM A fine write Anna-Lise, really capturing the moment that's about to corner us soon. Poetry hugs, Gordon Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 4:00 AM - Many thanks Gordon, for your kind visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith October 29, 2019 at 3:38 PM A beautiful poem with a beautiful picture. I can feel the cold and snow as I walk down the path. Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 3:59 AM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)