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November

november's north wind
stirs red oak's fallen brown leaves....
rain's moisture lingers

charcoal clouds hang high
separated by blue streaks....
sun highlights the day

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Caren Krutsinger

January 15, 2022 at 11:26 PM

"charcoal clouds" - I love this description of November's sky!

Brian Sambourne

November 30, 2021 at 7:49 PM

Hello Sara, You are fortunate to enjoy trees of color in November. After Halloween, most of our trees are bare. In fact we've had our first snow fall last week. Lovely tribute to November, with fine imagery. Be well. Brian

Brian Sambourne

January 10, 2022 at 8:06 PM

Greetings Sara. Yes I am a Canadian guy. My escapist cabin in the woods is on the rocky Canadian Shield. Sometimes we've had snow by mid October. Not lately, though, with global warming. Take care. Be well. Brian

Sara Kendrick

December 1, 2021 at 3:03 AM

Brian, You must live where it is colder. In the south we have a longer fall season but we have had cold snaps all through November but only two times or three at freezing. My gingko was just beginning to turn gold when it dropped down to freezing and all the leaves fell off then they turned gold on the ground. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

November 29, 2021 at 3:50 PM

very pretty! As for those who have passed away, Sara, there have been several others I know of. I wish I could think of the one lady's name it started with C I think. She wrote always super long poems. Tim Ryerson is another I really liked who passed away and I am sure there have to be more,

Sara Kendrick

November 30, 2021 at 5:14 AM

Andrea, I am sure that others have passed away especially during this two-year period of COVID. I think many who are on here are older Americans so there are usually more deaths per capita in that age group. Anyway, Thank you for dropping by. One sure thing in life there will be change. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

November 28, 2021 at 3:38 AM

November, beautiful November...Delice

Sara Kendrick

November 28, 2021 at 8:12 AM

November is a beautiful month such a transitional time from fall into winter with lovely color and cooler air. Thanks for the visit. Saraw

Victor Buhagiar

November 27, 2021 at 1:33 AM

You paint November perfectly.

Sara Kendrick

November 27, 2021 at 1:06 PM

Victor, Thanks for the uplifting review of my work. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

November 26, 2021 at 7:14 PM

Scenes like the one you have painted with your words always remind me that God is watching over us. Beautiful Sara. Blessings xxoo

Sara Kendrick

November 27, 2021 at 8:36 AM

Yes, He is. I appreciate the added statement or your faith within the comment. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 26, 2021 at 3:32 PM

Hello Sara Kendrick, yes this is the month of November described very well. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 27, 2021 at 7:21 AM

Hello Sara, you are welcome my friend. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick

November 27, 2021 at 3:33 AM

Thank you, Darlene. I am glad that you dropped by and took time to comment. Sara

Jack Horne

November 26, 2021 at 12:42 PM

you've painted a very vivid picture here

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2021 at 1:02 PM

Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Tom Cunningham

November 26, 2021 at 11:13 AM

Love the November autumn image Sara. Enjoy your weekend Tom

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2021 at 1:00 PM

Tom, Your well wishes are uplifting. We are trying to keep it straight exactly what day this is. LOL..Yesterday seemed like Sunday to us. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Sotto Poet

November 26, 2021 at 6:29 AM

Beautiful haiku, Sara; November is mainly gone, the skies have cleared, and the sun is beaming brightly outside. Enjoy your holiday

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2021 at 12:56 PM

Lasaad, There was an old saying about March coming in like a lamb and going out like a lion or visa versa. So November came in like a lamb and is going out like a lion I do believe. We do have sunshine today after only a few sprinkles last night but we have the north wind whipping around. Thanks for your visit. Sara