Noticed
I just want to be noticed
as life clouds perceptions
and days turn into confusion
when people get involved in a thought
the ones closest to them get lost
I scream from within
so quite the walls come near
the windows can count every tear
that falls beneath life's carpet
as I suppress the pain that connects
everyone that walks along a forsaken path
where trees seem decrepit
and the sky is a dark blue
the only one that can save me is you
as I wait alone in the night mist
I just want to be noticed
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