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Noticed

I just want to be noticed as life clouds perceptions and days turn into confusion when people get involved in a thought the ones closest to them get lost I scream from within so quite the walls come near the windows can count every tear that falls beneath life's carpet as I suppress the pain that connects everyone that walks along a forsaken path where trees seem decrepit and the sky is a dark blue the only one that can save me is you as I wait alone in the night mist I just want to be noticed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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