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Notice Things

Near the end, is far too late to find what you have lost; obvert your gaze to all the tiny miracles, to hear, to see, to touch; the wind through ancient Aegean trees re-formed to herculean bonsai; iridescent shimmering of Iris’ sunlit snow atop her goddess mountain; calico, rough against your tender sun-kissed skin as day turns into evening. Each thing you take the time to heed with love will be with you, always.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/11/2024 5:51:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Congratulations :)

Terry Miller
Date: 7/11/2024 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi

Joseph May

Date: 7/7/2024 5:24:00 AM

Congrats on your win Terry, Very nicely done

Terry Miller
Date: 7/11/2024 8:45:00 AM

Thank you Joseph

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/6/2024 12:59:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Notice Things" Double Acrostic write again. Have a great day/weekend..............

Terry Miller
Date: 7/11/2024 8:46:00 AM

Thank You Paula

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2024 9:24:00 AM

Wow. Not only a great double acrostic but you picked a cool phrase with great meaning

Terry Miller
Date: 7/2/2024 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Andrea I finally tackled this one it seemed daunting, but was fun in the end.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/1/2024 9:54:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Notice Things" Double Acrostic write. I found this to take extra time/thought to write. You did a great job here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a great day writing away..............

Terry Miller
Date: 7/2/2024 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Paula you did a great job on yours what a lot of fun.