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Notice You should notice, This gag of lull, When you utter sermons, How others, fill your means, Patronizing your sprite critic. Air is fumes, and reek, Elapsed intimacy, Scarlet waving it, In my direction, Hands on your wheel, Take me out tonight, Drive me out of this tight. You do, annoyed notice, My jitter-manic, My entertaining relish, Thrills you bitter,this day As repeating eyes rotate. But silence is your full-mouthed gale, Closed shut soupier, But in brown eyes, Expectation of my waking up, To a better you. Take me out tonight, Drive me out of this tight, Even with out you.

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Date: 1/15/2010 5:35:00 PM
I think you should publish ... this is the freshness that can breathe new life into poetry. Would I have the honor of publishing with you ... new pieces to match your cadence and your voice. Your write is so distinct
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