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Monday, July 24, 2023
Writing Challenge - N Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Nothingness

"One day I'll be in Hell and my pain on Earth will be over" by Poet my heart is filled with nothingness a complete void of despair it was once alive with joy but now there's nothing there you see my love has left me traded me in for pickle ball yes it's true took my heart and all what's worse is my faith was lost God has abandoned me I sit and I cry under the burning tree but how can I restore my broken heart that was shreaded into a million shards I try to find new friends but it is indeed hard so tonight I will cry as I always do and pray that one day my heart will be renewed what's worse is my faith was lost God has abandoned me I sit and I cry under the burning tree but my heart is still filled with nothingness a complete void of despair it was once alive with joy but now there's nothing there
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful yet sad story/write/quote. I Hope it is not true. Have a great day....................
Alex Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 12:07 AM
"but my heart is still filled with nothingness a complete void of despair it was once alive with joy but now there's nothing there" - Great writing. Congratulations!
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