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Lack of sun, we bought a house in the West The sun liked us very much Outside the house, grew plants The garden East of the house is verdant The North and South are so-so The West, the dirt is brown We thought to grow a garden over there The seeds refused to open The sun had scolded them We dug an open well to persuade them The sun scolded the well too Today we move back East Date: 06/14/2019

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Date: 6/14/2019 12:52:00 PM
Wow you very creatively uniquely write of how the sun parched and dried everything up, so u moved away from its scorching, good. Interesting poem. Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/14/2019 1:18:00 PM
Thank you I will, Aloha William

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