Nothing More Spectacular Than You

Down the boulevard the elixir of life
I drank; And your hand is clasped tight, 
Heaven's green grandeur everywhere, 
Myriad lovely blossoms--
Enthralled eyes fixed--
Fixed for ever, 
Not on them,  
But you, 
Love !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Tolliver Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 2:38 PM
What a lovely poem! Nice wording.
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Thanks, Jeralyn !
Jay Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Wonderful. Thanks for sharing this. Also, up until this moment, I had no idea Nonet poetry even existed.
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Thanks for praising my attempt.
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