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Nothing Like Ice Chewing

Chewing is my favorite sport You can have the wine, the port My teeth were sharp, my teeth were fine Until we hit that 30’s line Enamel gone, chipped off by ice, Tried to ignore dental advice Cavities in my icy mouth Five root canals, we’re going south Pain and awfulness even a bridge I think twice now when I open that frig

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/19/2018 11:18:00 PM
OUCH! ;O (Cute poem, though! ;)
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/20/2018 10:52:00 PM
*wince* Don't crunch so HARD! ;P (or maybe try chipped or shaved ice?!)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/19/2018 11:58:00 PM
I forgot to add that even the bridge broke.

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