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Nothing Lasts Forever

Left to regret another endeavor Why does nothing last forever Graded by some social measure Ruining all that we treasure Even life is not infinite Alive then dead next minute Hurry now time is short Remember now life's a sport Bound eternally only in spirit The end, we fear it... 01/15/18 For Contest: (10 Lines; 5 words) Rhyme Hosted by: Laura Loo WON 1st PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS

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Date: 1/21/2018 8:51:00 PM
Life is a sport. I love it. Congrats on your win, Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/18/2018 4:45:00 AM
I appreciate you and your kind words
Date: 1/20/2018 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Brian , your poem has a beautiful flow! Hugs Eve~`*
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/18/2018 4:45:00 AM
Thank you Eve
Date: 1/20/2018 5:18:00 PM
Dropping back to say congrats on your win Brian:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/18/2018 4:44:00 AM
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Date: 1/20/2018 10:59:00 AM
perfect rhythm and rhyme! loved everything about your poem dear Brian, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/18/2018 4:44:00 AM
Thank u Laura I love your contests
Date: 1/16/2018 4:01:00 PM
you portray the ups and downs of life in ten short lines and oh so true life is all too short. God luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/16/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Jan always appreciate hearing from you my friend

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