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Nothing Lasts Forever

Nothing Lasts Forever Weathered clapboards count death’s cadence bleached bones of faded lives rusted bells hang limply – silenced mourning beneath long tearless skies sad emptiness when longing dies. Once, bells pealed, come hither bright sunshine kissed love’s tower none felt the doubtful shiver one heart condemned to cower blood stained - within the bower. ©1/15/2018 submitted to – 10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme II – Poetry Contest sponsor – Laura Loo

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Date: 1/21/2018 8:45:00 PM
Words with a bite, very gripping poem. Loved it. Congrats on your win, John.
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Date: 1/20/2018 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 1/20/2018 3:03:00 PM
A powerful piece, congratulations John!
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Date: 1/20/2018 2:38:00 PM
your imagery gave me a chill down my spine John, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2018 1:13:00 PM
Wow! John this is really good, congratulations my friend...
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Date: 1/20/2018 10:54:00 AM
great rhythm and rhyme John, loved your poem, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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