John Lawless Poet Rhyme

Nothing Cold Can Stay

Thin ice forgives the cold
Slowly relents its hold
As ripples shake its grasp
A shimmering of diamonds pass
A gentle sunny warmth
Mists dancing in the swamp
Spring sun will claim the day
Nothing cold can stay

©2/21/2023

*with apologies to Mr. Frost

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Fin Chuuk March 2, 2023 at 4:30 PM I’m just fine with it not staying. Lol. Great write, John :)

Panagiota Romios March 2, 2023 at 1:30 PM Love tis, John! Frost would hug you. Pangie xo

Gershon Wolf February 27, 2023 at 6:51 PM Shout this to the Heavens! (Here comes March. Watch out!)

Paula Goldsmith February 27, 2023 at 2:13 PM A fun/creative write. I Love it and so will Mr. Frost. Have a great day writing away............................

Daniel Turner February 27, 2023 at 1:30 PM No need for apologies, John. i think Mr Frost would be delighted to read this poem. I was. Good luck my friend.