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Nothing At All

thermometer cold to the touch absent of heat, patron walks behind the taker mirror image, the wall the floors, nothing at all teeth chatter at base of my neck, “You see nothing but death!” goosebumps of fear, I say nothing, nothing at all laughter forests my space i dare not look scared, confused ice steam escapes hungry lips i hear the click of polished heels upon the deck drifting away i want to warn the crew but i can’t move transfixed ears alight with the flight of frenetic wings and screams i need to run but it’s over a cape draped across my shoulders “Ah, you’ve waited…” turns me around eyes bold red lips long black hair “I’ll let you live. Will you dare to tell…” As if it never happened, nothing at all the vampire vanishes but his eyes light the window at night to taunt when they ask me what i know my answer is nothing at all the sanatorium dressed for Halloween pumpkins blink, flare i see eyes everywhere 11/19/2020 True story ;)

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Date: 10/20/2020 6:36:00 AM
Damn this is really scary and based on a true story!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2020 5:12:00 PM
True story with a wink...lol. I did have a patron come in with a very cold temperature. I did a double take, took it again...the same. I took my own and nothing was wrong with the thermometer. Then my imagination took over...brr
Date: 10/20/2020 2:02:00 AM
This poem gave me the shivers. Images flowed and discarded and taken up again. I still feel the chill. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2020 5:27:00 AM
:)
Date: 10/20/2020 1:42:00 AM
- A scary story, Kim ... today's shadows and vampires ... we never know when they "popping up" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2020 5:28:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs :)
Date: 10/19/2020 8:37:00 PM
Exceptional storytelling. I can see you telling this tale around a campfire at night. Guaranteed to thrill-and chill! :0
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 9:21:00 PM
Thank you, Judy! I had to take someone’s temperature today to screen them for covid and was surprised by her very low body temperature. Well, you know, the imagination starts churning.
Date: 10/19/2020 5:10:00 PM
AMAZING! ~ Werewolf
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2020 5:51:00 PM
LOL...Wolfie! Thanks!

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