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Nothin' To Do

Nowhere to go ... nothin' to do Ended up here ... out of the blue, Don't wanna stay, don't wanna go home Takin' in the night air, writin' this poem.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/8/2023 4:53:00 PM

Very nice!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/29/2023 9:55:00 AM

Thanks, Kim :)

Len Gasun

Date: 5/8/2023 12:51:00 AM

Fantastic rhyme poem/song my dear poet friend Kelly. I can relate a bit my very dear friend. I love this a lot, the rhythm, flow and everything. So enjoyable to read. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/23/2023 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Len ... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, my friend :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/7/2023 11:59:00 AM

I like this rhythmic well crafted poem, Kelly. Thanks for sharing

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/20/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank you ... I'm glad you liked it :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/2/2023 6:31:00 PM

This is nice, Kelly, has a rhythm to it:) congratulations:)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/14/2023 5:00:00 PM

Thank you, Joanna :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/2/2023 3:49:00 PM

Hi Kelly, I echo what Daniel said. Congratulations on your HM. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/11/2023 3:49:00 PM

Hi Alexis ... Thank you for your kind words of advice ... Poetry and music are the things I turn to, too, when I have nothin' to do :) Have a wonderful week :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2023 8:26:00 AM

A fun write. A writer must write. So write ON... Have a great day writing away................

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/10/2023 4:19:00 PM

Will do :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/28/2023 10:01:00 AM

Beats doing nothing. Have a great weekend, Kelly:) I like to listen to music when Ive nothing to do or read. just a thought:)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/1/2023 9:49:00 AM

I agree, Daniel ... Music and poetry are the things I turn to when I have nothin' to do :) Hope you are having a great weekend, too :)