Nothin' To Do

Nowhere to go ... nothin' to do
Ended up here ... out of the blue,
Don't wanna stay, don't wanna go home
Takin' in the night air, writin' this poem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 4:53 PM
Very nice!
Deschler Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Thanks, Kim :)
Gasun Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 12:51 AM
Fantastic rhyme poem/song my dear poet friend Kelly. I can relate a bit my very dear friend. I love this a lot, the rhythm, flow and everything. So enjoyable to read. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Deschler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 9:59 AM
Thank you so very much, Len ... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, my friend :)
Poet Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 11:59 AM
I like this rhythmic well crafted poem, Kelly. Thanks for sharing
Deschler Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Thank you ... I'm glad you liked it :)
Daniel Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 6:31 PM
This is nice, Kelly, has a rhythm to it:) congratulations:)
Deschler Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 5:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna :)
Y. Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Hi Kelly, I echo what Daniel said. Congratulations on your HM. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Deschler Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Hi Alexis ... Thank you for your kind words of advice ... Poetry and music are the things I turn to, too, when I have nothin' to do :) Have a wonderful week :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 8:26 AM
A fun write. A writer must write. So write ON... Have a great day writing away................
Deschler Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 4:19 PM
Will do :)
Turner Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Beats doing nothing. Have a great weekend, Kelly:) I like to listen to music when Ive nothing to do or read. just a thought:)
Deschler Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 9:49 AM
I agree, Daniel ... Music and poetry are the things I turn to when I have nothin' to do :) Hope you are having a great weekend, too :)
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