Debbie Duncan Poet Triolet

Notes

Notes from there.
From the other side.
Some say little things.

Some say a lot.
Others say nothing at all.
I think to put a note

Inside of a bottle.
I'll send it to my lover.
To the one I really love.

To the one, I love inside.
Notes from that space.
Where you hold secrets inside.

And things you try to hide.
Make sure you catch it.
As it comes floating by.

Don't forget to catch it.
Feel the love inside.
For all the love you have inside.



8:30 pm Oct. 3, 2011

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Joe Maverick October 17, 2015 at 1:38 AM I find this to be a very 'explorative' piece Debbie, also very readable..' and enjoyable.!

Sara Kendrick October 16, 2015 at 3:22 PM Timely idea a message in a bottle..I wonder who will receive the note..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Kelly Deschler August 25, 2015 at 10:42 PM Such tender, heartfelt words in this romantic write, Debbie. Very nicely penned!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2015 at 4:24 AM - Dear Debbie, a lovely poem written by your heart :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock August 16, 2015 at 8:28 PM Some secret lover he must be and I hope he catches that love note inside. Nicely written. love phyl

Duke Beaufort August 12, 2015 at 7:47 PM Debby, I love the psychological aspects of your poetry. There is nicely arranged imagery in this. It's beautiful and to the point. I just have to smile and applaud.

Robert Johnson August 12, 2015 at 11:01 AM Hope that's bottled up inside. Waiting for love to abide. And get released out from the moors. To sail away to far off shores. I love the title Debbie. These silent notes we do write.

Len Gasun August 11, 2015 at 8:21 PM So lovely and sweet my dear friend Debbie. I love it and enjoyed reading it this morning. Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Peter Lewis Holmes August 10, 2015 at 10:58 PM Nice write Debbie and thanks for the comment...Peter

Shadow Hamilton August 5, 2015 at 2:15 PM written with love Debbie splendid hugs 7

Ravi Sathasivam August 5, 2015 at 8:03 AM Interesting write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2015 at 11:30 PM this is sweet, but are you sure it is triolet? It does look like some kind of a form to me. A very interesting one.