Note On the Refrigerator

Did I ever tell you
how beautiful you are?
Casually, one morning
(with the bathroom door ajar)
as I said we need more toothpaste,
or I’m off at quarter-to,
did I hold you, as I wanted?
Did I mention it to you?

Did I ever say I need you
like the wheat needs sun and rain?
Did I point out that I’ll never
find a girl like you again?
Did I state that every busy hour
my thoughts to you incline?
It was on my things-to-do list,
and it must have slipped my mind.

I wonder if I thanked you
for being at my side,
or said that when I’m with you,
how I’m all pumped up with pride.
Have I told you I adore you
when you kiss my weary brow?
Forgive me if I didn’t, love.
And so I’m saying it now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 21, 2017 at 7:14 AM
You can write romantic refrigerator notes :) You can write romantic poems like Chris Green can. I love this. It's gentle, warm, the rhyme is impeccable.
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February 21, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Oh! Thank you, I can say the same to you, to be honest.....
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February 21, 2017 at 8:53 AM
Knowing how gifted you are, I take your comments as magnificent compliments, my friend.
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February 21, 2017 at 6:17 AM
A lovely poem ... 'like the wheat needs sun and rain' is a beautiful line ... nice poetry ...
Coy Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 8:53 AM
You are very kind. Thank you!
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