Olusegun Arowolo Poet Couplet

Not Yet Time

I drift slowly,walking through the garden of bliss down stream,
"Go back son!,it`s not yet time" shouted a voice from the supreme.



CONTEST:"Time-single rhyming couplet" sponsored by Black-eyed Susan

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Fabiyas M V September 12, 2012 at 8:50 AM Beautiful poem,Olusegun.Congratulations on your great win!

Lee Ramage September 8, 2012 at 10:35 PM Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2012 at 3:18 PM This is such a deserved win. BIG congrats on your win with this gem.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders September 6, 2012 at 11:47 AM I love your unique couplet, Olusegun! Wonderful thoughts...congrats...:))

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2012 at 7:27 PM OLUSEGUN, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

Kim Merryman September 5, 2012 at 5:32 PM I like this, Olusegun! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown September 5, 2012 at 7:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud September 4, 2012 at 10:25 PM an arresting piece from your poetic cache, olu...congrats with huggs! :)

Vicky Tsiluma September 4, 2012 at 11:30 AM Congrats on your win Arowolo! Nice write!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 4, 2012 at 10:17 AM Like this, well done Olusegun xx

Terry O'Leary August 30, 2012 at 4:38 PM Very nice! Terry

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2012 at 2:43 PM wow, amazing!! so profound.