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Not What It Seems

You believe i'm happy when you take a look at me But i'm in so much pain you see, Just take a glimps in my eye's and You will see My looks are not what they seem to be You believe I live a great life Don't lie, I heard your whispers and I seen your stares Just walk a mile in my shoes and You will see My life is not what it seems to be I heard you think I got it all Well you heard wrong My life is so incomplete Your the one with the dad, not me Your the one with the friends So tell me why you hate me when I'm not at all what I seem to be

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/20/2009 10:53:00 AM

Breana, While your life may be hard, your poetry is beautiful!! I've always believed we should not try to judge others. Have you read "Richard Cory" by E.A. Robinson? Everyone thought he had a great life too, that is, everyone except Richard himself. Nice writing style, Carolyn

Jen H.

Date: 1/23/2009 11:02:00 AM

Man, I read that one a few times, and you pretty much seemed to pen the words in my mind, on paper. I know it's hard, but it will get better, eventually. ~Jen~

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/11/2009 11:02:00 AM

down to earth and down with life, love this small gem and really enjoyed reading it. Have a great day.

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/10/2009 8:18:00 PM

Deep expressions here Breana. I hope all gets better...Raul

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/10/2009 8:06:00 PM

Deep write Breana, you will find out later in life that haters are everywhere, at school, at work, in the stores, malls, everywhere, they hate you and they don't even know you, I learned to just ignore,don't give the satisfaction of responding... thoughtfully expressed..great poem, keep up the good work *Tyesha

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/10/2009 12:30:00 PM

wow, nice like it lotz .....Maryam

Judy Riley

Date: 1/9/2009 9:48:00 PM

sounds like teenage drama, well put emotion, you will see in time it all works out the way it should. Good testament to your feelings. thanks for sharing Judy riley

Michaela Payne

Date: 1/9/2009 9:21:00 PM

I know how you feel, the fake face that everyone sees. This was a great poem Breana, very expressive. Blessings to you :) ~Michaela~