Not too Shabby Mate

“Not too Shabby”

(one of my market regulars wrote us a lovely letter.. to raise our flagging spirits..and this is our tribute to you Tom..who whenever you ask how he is?....says not too shabby)


Another market dawning

Under a Victorian awning

No fawning or scorning

Cheeky grin adorning


With aplomb..hedonic insights 

Sardonic delights of 

Another Tom/Com bomb


Ironic demonic highlights
 
Sarky sparky malarkey

Anarchy..heady heights

Of our Saturday morning


One of those sorts

Whatever the weather

Always sports shorts


The kind (of) bloke

Quick with a joke

No fibs…his nibs

Not woke..just needs dafter

Laughter…with everything broke



Tom loves heaps of peeps

But would confess

Except for the bolder

Older folks shoulder barges

Along with elbows pokes

Stropping they’re stopping 

Him shopping.. at Caithness


Tom’s other fave rave

Those prattling in Pak n Save

Crave.. best bet to shun

Send to their grave 

Run & get the Gatling gun


Different skills he brings

With his shiny dome

Has done many things

Did roam far from home

Bouncer in Alice Springs


Not one to boast

But made the most

Of his recent West coast

Host..decent Hokitika the toast


Got the mettle

In fettle so fine

Which’s why we purloined


The first rate line you coined

Tom.. you are a “Ray of Sunshine”

Great Celtic blue eyed trait


Not too shabby…mate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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