Not the Same

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Sun scorching, sweltering, sizzling beach My hardened soles resist the heat Sunglasses shielding my eyes White cotton ball clouds glide Along deep blue skies But I’m blue too Intensely Missing You *** December 12, 2019 F F I series 34 nonet Brian Strand, sponsor

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Karen Steele

Date: 11/10/2020 5:18:00 AM

Love it. Been to places like your picture. But the more beautiful a place 'missing you' is always there. Thank you for that. Karen

Mark Toney
Date: 11/10/2020 7:09:00 AM

Perfect comment for the mood I’m in. Karen, your visit is much appreciated :) ~Mark.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/4/2020 11:58:00 AM

Great picture and poem. I love the beach. Happy New Year..........

Mark Toney
Date: 1/4/2020 12:05:00 PM

Thank you, Paula, for your encouraging comments, visit and well wishes. I like the beach too! ~Mark

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/12/2019 12:29:00 PM

Hello Mark Toney, yes it is sad when you miss someone. Merry Christmas. Have a nice day my friend.

Mark Toney
Date: 12/12/2019 1:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, Darlene! ~Mark