Not So Young

she said I looked young ~ it was then I realized I'm not young anymore

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Deb M

Date: 10/18/2024 8:01:00 AM

And thats all it took Jim….no hints or red flags beforehand??Ha….Debx

Jim Healey
Date: 10/18/2024 10:11:00 AM

Oh, the hints and red flags are there, but we try to ignore them as much as possible, don't we??? Nice to hear from you Deb, as always. Take care.

John Lawless

Date: 10/18/2024 5:54:00 AM

and it ain't the pants that make ya "look" fat....age sneaks up because we don't look behind. thanks for the chuckle

Jim Healey
Date: 10/18/2024 6:40:00 AM

A good chuckle - with more than a grain of truth. Glad you enjoyed it, John. Take care.