Not Quite a Diebhidhe

the pools of your eyes are calm
my fishing pole sticks out straight
something nibbles my bobbers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Lol! Love it ;D, xomo!
Connelly Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Maureen. Once again I had to use "I Don't Know" as the poetic form since the Irish form wasn't listed, and then my poem wasn't true to the form; such woe is me jajaja.
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