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Not Own Volition

we can collectively show compassion to help the needy to uplift them from squalor; they do not know why they suffer, put in such condition, not of their own wishing! 4.5.2020

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2020 7:04:00 AM

thought provoking piece, Mohan, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/18/2020 6:13:00 PM

Jan, thanks for appreciating. Mohan

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 5/15/2020 6:30:00 AM

Lovely compassionate write, Mohan! No one chooses to be in the financial situation that society puts them in! All children should have equal opportunities and well being! The divide is so great! Congrats on your win!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/15/2020 7:22:00 AM

Krish, guarantee of a minimum, what to talk of equality, can lead to such better social results than we have today. Thanx. Mohan

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/14/2020 11:20:00 PM

Very powerful, Mohan. Words to ponder. Congratulatioins on your winning placement.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/15/2020 7:19:00 AM

Sam, yes, they are given no time to even think that way in their quest to earn their daily bread and butter.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/14/2020 9:47:00 AM

they do not know why they suffer..true.. Congrats on your placement Mohan..

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/15/2020 7:17:00 AM

Jenish, thanx for appreciating. Mohan

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 5:37:00 AM

True! The needy never know why they suffer and we cannot end their suffering, but we can surely help to reduce it. You have really great thoughts Mohan :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/14/2020 6:34:00 AM

Thanx again Aditi for your kind remarks. And congrats to you for your own fine placement in the contest. Mohan.