Mohan Chutani Poet Cinquain

Not Own Volition

we can
collectively
show compassion to help 
the needy to uplift them from 
squalor;
they do not know why they suffer,
put in such condition,
not of their own
wishing!

4.5.2020

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Jan Allison May 18, 2020 at 7:04 AM thought provoking piece, Mohan, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Mohan Chutani May 18, 2020 at 6:13 PM Jan, thanks for appreciating. Mohan

Krish Radhakrishna May 15, 2020 at 6:30 AM Lovely compassionate write, Mohan! No one chooses to be in the financial situation that society puts them in! All children should have equal opportunities and well being! The divide is so great! Congrats on your win! Mohan Chutani May 15, 2020 at 7:22 AM Krish, guarantee of a minimum, what to talk of equality, can lead to such better social results than we have today. Thanx. Mohan

Sam Kauffman May 14, 2020 at 11:20 PM Very powerful, Mohan. Words to ponder. Congratulatioins on your winning placement. Mohan Chutani May 15, 2020 at 7:19 AM Sam, yes, they are given no time to even think that way in their quest to earn their daily bread and butter.

Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 9:47 AM they do not know why they suffer..true.. Congrats on your placement Mohan.. Mohan Chutani May 15, 2020 at 7:17 AM Jenish, thanx for appreciating. Mohan

Aditi Mishra May 14, 2020 at 5:37 AM True! The needy never know why they suffer and we cannot end their suffering, but we can surely help to reduce it. You have really great thoughts Mohan :) Mohan Chutani May 14, 2020 at 6:34 AM Thanx again Aditi for your kind remarks. And congrats to you for your own fine placement in the contest. Mohan.