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Not Living Life According To the Commandments

Time slips away as life does, they give us enough clues how to live and prosper; many refuse the knowledge they provide and put it aside... is there the one who's clever? Be aware that not living life according to the commandments, it's shortened it by years, being a portent testimony of grief to a controversial belief; who has lived long enough can explain their feeling of extreme delightfulness... instead of thinking about death! Finding understanding is not harder than looking for a trustworthy, humble heart which has no greed inside, only compassion; Has anybody found it and dispelled their distrust? O unfair life ragefully bringing darkness upon the glorious dreams not yet transformed into realistic visions, these resentful thoughts are the echoes of battles not won... ravens circling over the wounded bodies in mortal agony, isn't the gushing of their blood a cry for imminent clemency? Doesn't this bleak spectacle attest to Man's unmercifulness? If a scream is prevented from exhaling the choking breath, what could one do to escape this realm of oppressed sentiment? Exhale twice and let it fly to where mercy abolishes the rod of torment, where humans arent' as cruel as Seth, the merciless god of death!

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