Ivy Vresk Poet Rhyme

Not Important Any More

Not important any more,

Not important any more,
nothing else on this world,
while tears are running from eyes,
our hands are holding tight,
what will tomorrow bring,
what kind of future,
is in front of us,

no,
not any more,
not important on this world,

you are here
holding me tight
no more secret hopes,
no more  foals  alarm,

nothing else matters 
any more,
for you and I,
in this chaotic world,
as you're holding me tight,
I am ready to walk,
walk with you, 
those miles and miles, before 
I go

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Daver Austin September 25, 2012 at 12:35 PM A foal is a young horse, ismeta. Is that the word you want? I like your style. Congrats on the selection. daver

Prince Ekpemandu November 3, 2011 at 11:07 AM wow..nice piece dear..love you diction Ivy Vresk November 3, 2011 at 4:33 PM Thank you my dear friend,ivy

Carol Sunshine Brown November 1, 2011 at 10:51 AM Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us and for your kind comments on my writing Ivy. Love, Carol Ivy Vresk November 4, 2011 at 7:19 PM THANK YOU CAROL,IVY

Titus Loh November 1, 2011 at 12:41 AM Special poem for someone special holding your hand. Touching read. Keep sharing, Ivy. Titus -aftertim.tumblr.com- Ivy Vresk November 4, 2011 at 7:21 PM YES FOR EVERY ONE WHO ENJOYS READING ,THANK YOU DEAR FRIEND,IVY

Prince Ekpemandu October 31, 2011 at 2:40 PM nice diction..a very interesting poem Ivy Vresk October 31, 2011 at 2:52 PM thank you very much,your word of support means a lot to me,Ivy

Sara Kendrick October 31, 2011 at 2:36 PM Good one..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara ...Like the Robert Frost touch at the end.. Ivy Vresk October 31, 2011 at 2:53 PM Thank you very much,yes Robert Frost is one of my favorite poet of all,Ivy