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Not Important Any More

Not important any more, Not important any more, nothing else on this world, while tears are running from eyes, our hands are holding tight, what will tomorrow bring, what kind of future, is in front of us, no, not any more, not important on this world, you are here holding me tight no more secret hopes, no more foals alarm, nothing else matters any more, for you and I, in this chaotic world, as you're holding me tight, I am ready to walk, walk with you, those miles and miles, before I go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/25/2012 12:35:00 PM
A foal is a young horse, ismeta. Is that the word you want? I like your style. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/3/2011 11:07:00 AM
wow..nice piece dear..love you diction
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 11/3/2011 4:33:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend,ivy
Date: 11/1/2011 10:51:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us and for your kind comments on my writing Ivy. Love, Carol
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 11/4/2011 7:19:00 PM
THANK YOU CAROL,IVY
Date: 11/1/2011 12:41:00 AM
Special poem for someone special holding your hand. Touching read. Keep sharing, Ivy. Titus -aftertim.tumblr.com-
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 11/4/2011 7:21:00 PM
YES FOR EVERY ONE WHO ENJOYS READING ,THANK YOU DEAR FRIEND,IVY
Date: 10/31/2011 2:40:00 PM
nice diction..a very interesting poem
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 10/31/2011 2:52:00 PM
thank you very much,your word of support means a lot to me,Ivy
Date: 10/31/2011 2:36:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara ...Like the Robert Frost touch at the end..
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Ivy Vresk
Date: 10/31/2011 2:53:00 PM
Thank you very much,yes Robert Frost is one of my favorite poet of all,Ivy

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