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I just wanna say there's no words for me kno how to  express the words to say, how I'm feeling in my heart or how i see before its played, as its playing in my mind and it happens without say, living life in the moment with no rights to give or take, still i lived it untill my voice was heard, from the people who once listened and understood me for whom I really am,yet i cant help but to hurt n feel inside that they the ones I really don't deserve, I just like to take the time to say my thank yous for in times I know its u I've hurt.  To be continued
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artlyy Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 8:53 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 12:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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