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Not Fair

How cruel my heart
is!... To persist in beating
although you're gone...

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Poet Destroyer A

February 23, 2013 at 12:06 PM

Hi Hanna, once again :-) , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)

Daver Austin

February 21, 2013 at 10:31 AM

I'm not sure this is a Haiku, but I like it. Congrats on the selection. daver

Terry O'Leary

February 10, 2013 at 12:45 PM

It beats to smile another day... Terry (very nice)

Poet Destroyer A

January 21, 2013 at 8:00 PM

about your poem: wow...I'm glad to know that your heart still beats, even though a good chunk is gone... love the haiku...pd

Poet Destroyer A

January 21, 2013 at 7:36 PM

Hannah, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA