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Not fair

How cruel my heart
is!... To persist in beating
although you're gone...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/23/2013 12:06:00 PM
Hi Hanna, once again :-) , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)
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Date: 2/21/2013 10:31:00 AM
I'm not sure this is a Haiku, but I like it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 2/10/2013 12:45:00 PM
It beats to smile another day... Terry (very nice)
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Date: 1/21/2013 8:00:00 PM
about your poem: wow...I'm glad to know that your heart still beats, even though a good chunk is gone... love the haiku...pd
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:36:00 PM
Hannah, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA
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Date: 1/13/2013 7:07:00 AM
Hannah am back again, a big welcome to the soup, keep writing gems like this one....David
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Date: 1/12/2013 5:14:00 PM
I like this poem. Good write - JH
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Date: 1/12/2013 4:44:00 PM
It continues to beat for another day.......
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:23:00 AM
moving write! I enjoyed reading your poem! Lori
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Date: 1/12/2013 10:30:00 AM
Hannah I like this, life isn't fair...David
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Date: 1/12/2013 10:29:00 AM
Sad, Hannah - well written. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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