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Not Even Gone

One day i woke up sun the day went on my mind continued continuous thoughts a day to perfect not real I come home love we go about our routine forever i waited for you lost i went to find you you were gone but you were there empty I think of you everyday you are gone but your still with me. one unreal sunny day i lost you and i feel so empty but I will love you forever. DAD RIP.

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Date: 6/18/2024 7:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 2:23:00 PM
ashlew wright, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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