Not Even Gone

One day i woke up
sun
the day went on my mind continued continuous thoughts
a day to perfect 
not real
I come home
love
we go about our routine
forever
i waited for you
lost
i went to find you
you were gone
but you were there
empty
I think of you everyday
you are gone
but your still with me.

one unreal sunny day i lost you and i feel so empty but I will love you forever.


DAD RIP.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 18, 2024 at 7:39 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 2:23 PM
ashlew wright, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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