Not Enough

NOT ENOUGH ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Four lines are, no, not enough to describe its beauty, our planet Earth. Do I have the time, yes, but I must rush, for it is sadly dying? Overground, underground, it has lost its laughter and has lost its mirth. Four lines were not enough, so very sad, bereft of words, I'm crying!
When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme! Poetry Contest - Sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 6/16/2018 10:32:00 AM
I really like your four lines, MIck. Congrats in the contest.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/16/2018 11:15:00 AM
Many thanks on both counts Andrea, Mick
Date: 6/14/2018 8:50:00 PM
Wonderful write, Mick !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/15/2018 5:14:00 AM
Many thanks Eve! Mick
Date: 6/13/2018 10:18:00 AM
Ah! Those last two words are the clincher, Mick! (Now I'm crying too)...Congrats on your win! ~ Gershon
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/13/2018 10:27:00 AM
Many thanks Gershon. Mick
Date: 6/13/2018 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Mick, your four lines say so much truth my friend, well written. :))
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/13/2018 10:25:00 AM
Many thanks Roy. Mick
Date: 6/13/2018 7:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, Mick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/13/2018 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Mick
Date: 6/13/2018 7:13:00 AM
You are right, so that is why you need to use your vocabulary to say as much as you can Mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/13/2018 10:23:00 AM
Many thanks Silent your appreciation, appreciated. Mick
Date: 6/13/2018 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations Mick. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/13/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Tom. Mick
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