Not Enough

NOT ENOUGH ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Four lines are, no, not enough to describe its beauty, our planet Earth. Do I have the time, yes, but I must rush, for it is sadly dying? Overground, underground, it has lost its laughter and has lost its mirth. Four lines were not enough, so very sad, bereft of words, I'm crying!
When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme! Poetry Contest - Sponsored by Silent One
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Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 10:32 AM
I really like your four lines, MIck. Congrats in the contest.
Talbot Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Many thanks on both counts Andrea, Mick
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 8:50 PM
Wonderful write, Mick !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*
Talbot Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 5:14 AM
Many thanks Eve! Mick
Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Ah! Those last two words are the clincher, Mick! (Now I'm crying too)...Congrats on your win! ~ Gershon
Talbot Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Many thanks Gershon. Mick
Pett Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Mick, your four lines say so much truth my friend, well written. :))
Talbot Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:25 AM
Many thanks Roy. Mick
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:21 AM
- Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, Mick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Talbot Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Mick
One Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:13 AM
You are right, so that is why you need to use your vocabulary to say as much as you can Mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Talbot Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Many thanks Silent your appreciation, appreciated. Mick
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations Mick. Tom
Talbot Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Thanks Tom. Mick
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