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Not cool

Told you a hundred times.
Please... tie your shoelaces for heaven's sake!
You'll fall all over yourself !



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2026 at 6:18 AM
The funny thing is, they don’t. Perhaps they’ve learned to navigate life though unkempt. lol
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