Not Broken

Don't fix me
I'm not broken
Don't listen
I have spoken
Echo falls on deafened ears
Devil grants my deepest fear
Render me - unworthy
Remind me
You're better off without me

Release me
Push me into hatred's splendour
Let her touch me soft and tender
With her last stroke I rememer
I reflect her

Deeper and deeper I stare
Past the dungeon of despair
Hatred drowns me in her glare

I become her

I am evil
I am hatred
I am terror

Silence - let my wish be spoken
Eyes behold my true love's token
Blind

Don't fix me
I'm not broken
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/7/2013 7:23:00 AM
Ngiyabonga kini nonke (thank you all) i can't tell you how much i appreciate that you took the time to view my work. i'll be sure to check out some of your stuff as well, can't wait!
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Date: 10/7/2013 2:14:00 AM
splendid indeed , keep the ink dripping dear!
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Date: 10/3/2013 10:33:00 AM
Nice........i am speechless.....Good poem
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Date: 10/4/2013 4:02:00 AM
thank you.
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