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Not Always Golden

silence without

    all the while

        crying within

bereavementemotionssenryu

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Jack Jordan

Date: 10/21/2013 8:41:00 PM

Intense! You nailed the emotion, which seems to me to be difficult to find in senryu and haiku. You found it... Jack

Michael Ainsley

Date: 10/20/2013 9:31:00 AM

Great insight! Silence can be as terrifying as it can be beautiful ; Attitude and prospective make all the difference . I hope you are smiling beyond the sadness of the moment. Sending happy thoughts your way; Michael.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2013 11:13:00 PM

a superb senryu!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/18/2013 1:50:00 PM

....so true, Sharon ! - Wish you a great weekend, enjoy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/18/2013 11:47:00 AM

hi, sharon.. been a while; so glad i came around to savor the bittersweet mood of your work... much dleighted!..:) huggs

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/18/2013 12:10:00 PM

Hello Nette, so good to see you once again. Hope you are well and doing fine. Thank you for your always kind words...Lov, Shar

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/17/2013 1:00:00 PM

alway a pleasure to read. especially from on of my original soupers.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/17/2013 6:35:00 AM

I love poems that tell an entire tale in a few words. You are a master at it.

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/17/2013 12:09:00 PM

Hello again hon. Just a little quickie, my time is so limited..Someday like you I wish I could just give most all of my time to writing. That is a precious dream. Your so precious and I Thank you for all your kind words. Lov, Shar

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/16/2013 9:55:00 PM

Very intriguing on the first read but then I could know the light humor in it, very nice, Shar

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/17/2013 12:08:00 PM

Hello Dr. Mehta, I am so pleased you liked this, and you got it! I truly love that you get it...Thank you for reading me and for always being so kind... As Always, Shar

Not Always Golden

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