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Not Alone

I know your sad , I know your alone...
I rack my brain to change your tone...
I guess I'll pull up a chair next to your soul...
My page will start off blank till this poem is told...
I will dip my pen in the warmth of your heart...
Then dot the verses with a darker shade that's apart...
When all is complete and the form is intact...
My voice will echo through where a smile has lacked...



inspired by Tracie "Dreamweaver"

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Deck Fitzgerald Date: 12/3/2011 6:16:00 AM Nice write Micheal , the love of MY life Tracie is quite an inspiration . Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/3/2011 7:01:00 AM Yes she is. Your a lucky man. A wonderful lady and poet.

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/28/2011 6:15:00 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Michael. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 11/26/2011 12:36:00 PM Wonderful write!!!! Congratulations on your well deserved win!!...Lori Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 11/25/2011 3:31:00 PM Fine write,Michael..Touchy and emotional.Congrats on your win... Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 11/24/2011 10:20:00 AM "I will dip my pen in the warmth of your heart" What a beautiful line Michael. Congratulations Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/23/2011 11:34:00 PM Michael, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d. Login to Reply

Kelli Egloff-Metzgar Date: 11/23/2011 3:53:00 PM I love this:)Very well written with alot of emotion...Kelli Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 11/22/2011 8:14:00 AM this is beautiful, Michael. I'd love someone to pull his chair next to my soul.. :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/21/2011 11:57:00 PM This is what I would call "precious" and how nice to see that it was inspired by Dreamweaver!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/21/2011 4:32:00 PM beauty to behold in these lines Michael luv.. I will dip my pen in the warmth of your heart.. a fascinating line and thought..u have a marvelous way to convey lovely messages to warm a reader's heart .. J.G. in missing mode..xoxo Login to Reply

Tracy Edwards Date: 11/21/2011 4:26:00 PM Aww this is such a lovely poem Michael..I agree with Nette you have the power to cheer people up and make them smile with your words Thank you :) xx Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/21/2011 6:54:00 AM good morning Michael this is a very uplifting poem... Tracie sure can be an inspiration when it comes to... words I will not say which 1 kidding kidding she is a great poet.. I'm always delighted to read her work anytime... great... pd.. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/21/2011 2:35:00 AM awhh, this somehow make sfeel better, michael.. you words have the power to heal and cheer.. wonderful write! :) huggs! Login to Reply

Lizzie Treetop Date: 11/20/2011 6:02:00 PM I'm feeling what you also feel Michael you expressed it so well! Login to Reply

Nathan D. Date: 11/20/2011 2:48:00 PM go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet Login to Reply

Date: 11/20/2011 1:05:00 PM A nice tribute to Tracie, Michael. I'm sure she appreciates what you wrote for her. Thanks for your comments. Love Alexa Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/20/2011 12:24:00 PM This will certainly brighten Tracie's day, Michael. There are quite a few of us who are alone and the dipping of your pen into Tracie's heart of golden warmth is such a creative way of describing the influence she's had on your life. Awesome, my friend! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/20/2011 11:55:00 AM Dedicated to Tracie and inspired by her piece "All ALone".... I hope you like it Tracie.... luv Michael Login to Reply Tracy Edwards Date: 11/21/2011 4:55:00 PM Thank you Its lovely x