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Not Alone

I know your sad , I know your alone... I rack my brain to change your tone... I guess I'll pull up a chair next to your soul... My page will start off blank till this poem is told... I will dip my pen in the warmth of your heart... Then dot the verses with a darker shade that's apart... When all is complete and the form is intact... My voice will echo through where a smile has lacked... inspired by Tracie "Dreamweaver"

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Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 12/3/2011 6:16:00 AM

Nice write Micheal , the love of MY life Tracie is quite an inspiration .

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 12/3/2011 7:01:00 AM

Yes she is. Your a lucky man. A wonderful lady and poet.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2011 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Michael. Love, Carol

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 11/26/2011 12:36:00 PM

Wonderful write!!!! Congratulations on your well deserved win!!...Lori

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/25/2011 3:31:00 PM

Fine write,Michael..Touchy and emotional.Congrats on your win...

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/24/2011 10:20:00 AM

"I will dip my pen in the warmth of your heart" What a beautiful line Michael. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2011 11:34:00 PM

Michael, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Kelli Egloff-Metzgar

Date: 11/23/2011 3:53:00 PM

I love this:)Very well written with alot of emotion...Kelli

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/22/2011 8:14:00 AM

this is beautiful, Michael. I'd love someone to pull his chair next to my soul.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2011 11:57:00 PM

This is what I would call "precious" and how nice to see that it was inspired by Dreamweaver!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2011 4:32:00 PM

beauty to behold in these lines Michael luv.. I will dip my pen in the warmth of your heart.. a fascinating line and thought..u have a marvelous way to convey lovely messages to warm a reader's heart .. J.G. in missing mode..xoxo

Tracy Edwards

Date: 11/21/2011 4:26:00 PM

Aww this is such a lovely poem Michael..I agree with Nette you have the power to cheer people up and make them smile with your words Thank you :) xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2011 6:54:00 AM

good morning Michael this is a very uplifting poem... Tracie sure can be an inspiration when it comes to... words I will not say which 1 kidding kidding she is a great poet.. I'm always delighted to read her work anytime... great... pd..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/21/2011 2:35:00 AM

awhh, this somehow make sfeel better, michael.. you words have the power to heal and cheer.. wonderful write! :) huggs!

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/20/2011 6:02:00 PM

I'm feeling what you also feel Michael you expressed it so well!

Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 2:48:00 PM

go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet

Date: 11/20/2011 1:05:00 PM

A nice tribute to Tracie, Michael. I'm sure she appreciates what you wrote for her. Thanks for your comments. Love Alexa

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/20/2011 12:24:00 PM

This will certainly brighten Tracie's day, Michael. There are quite a few of us who are alone and the dipping of your pen into Tracie's heart of golden warmth is such a creative way of describing the influence she's had on your life. Awesome, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/20/2011 11:55:00 AM

Dedicated to Tracie and inspired by her piece "All ALone".... I hope you like it Tracie.... luv Michael

Tracy Edwards
Date: 11/21/2011 4:55:00 PM

Thank you Its lovely x