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Not Abandoned


i lost your love once
you felt abandoned by me...
my love brought you back


7-11-2019
Senryu  Greed, Loss or Lust Contest-"Loss"  4th place
sponsor:   Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Jeanne Mcgee | Year Posted 2019

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July 17, 2019 at 11:56 AM

Ahhh Love!! A matter of loss...and gain! Congratulations on your fine win, Jeanne. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

July 16, 2019 at 6:18 PM

very nice how it ended well . Congrats for the win

July 16, 2019 at 8:34 AM

Just saw the comments below, happy for you Jeanne and congratulations on your win. Tom

July 16, 2019 at 12:19 PM

Thanks Tom!

July 15, 2019 at 7:03 PM

Jeanne, congratulations on your winning placement, like the twist at the end!

July 16, 2019 at 12:07 AM

Thanks for your efforts putting on the contest. I enjoyed it and thank you for my placement!

Caren Krutsinger

July 12, 2019 at 9:10 AM

Good luck in the contest. Heartfelt!

July 12, 2019 at 9:28 AM

I had a real fallout with my nieces for a few years but they are back in my life again and I'm so glad...just love them to pieces!

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