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Not a Toy

Life’s gift he received,
 
A toy to play thought to be-
 

Heavens were let down!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
     11 January 2016

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Legendary Legend

January 13, 2016 at 3:04 PM

awesome poem....

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 14, 2016 at 9:09 AM

Thank you for your kindness, dear L.L.!

Kp Nunez

January 12, 2016 at 4:18 AM

Wasted opportunity! Powerful write there, sire. 7. Kim :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 12, 2016 at 7:01 PM

Thank you so much, dear Kim! You so gracious!

Andrea Dietrich

January 11, 2016 at 5:15 PM

and probably heaven let HIM down too (for his own actions!!)

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 11, 2016 at 7:09 PM

Very much so! Thank you, dear Andrea!

Eve Roper

January 11, 2016 at 2:41 PM

It is a shame to waste a gift . Well done dear friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 11, 2016 at 7:10 PM

Absolutely, dear Eve! Thank you very much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 11, 2016 at 12:16 PM

- Our life is the total of the choices we've made, I guess - Well written dear friend ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 11, 2016 at 12:34 PM

Yes, it is. Anne-Lise! Here, however, the point is that each one of us comes to life with a specific mission, if we do not honor our mission then we betray the one who gave us the gift of life: God! Thank you dearest for your visit and constructive comment!